Friday, 6 June 2014


Recount: A time i was successful. 

W.A.L.T: Retell of a past experience 
W.I.L.F: Audience has all the information needed.


Should I try it I thought. Nah i  might fall off. ''Have a try Hoera , you know how to ride a motorbike" my dad said. "Yep, but this is almost a big persons bike and I'm only nine".

Then I thought I can do this. I slowly walked to the bike. My whole body was shaking.


My dad jumped on and kick started the bike for me. He jumped off and held the bike for me. Man, when I jumped on to my dads motorbike my heart was pounding. I took off slowly.

I was nervous. But I rid it! All by myself!

1 comment:

  1. I like your story because you we weren't scared to hop on the motorbike.
    ki a kaha a koe.

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